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Subject: (KDB_Gong Cheol Sin) Remember Me?



Hello, I'm Gong Cheol Sin (family name is Sin)

Call me Mr. Sin.


I work for KDB(=Korea Development Bank) and KoCC(=KOrea Consulting Center for Overseas infra & plant projects)


My original Work place is KDB. But I was dispatched from KDB to KoCC(located on the 1st floor of K-Exim Bank on Yeoido in Seoul) to help Medium and Small Enterprise that go to outbound for the overseas Business, especially, infra and plant Construction.

though the Financial consulting.


I Would appreciate today's meeting and conference.

I'd like to see you in the near future.


Keep in touch with me whenever you need my tips and friend of yours.


I add my name cards and a picture to this email.


Best RGS,

Gong Cheol Sin. 


 

 

 

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Subject: Greetings fro KDB man G. C.


 

Hi, this is Gong Chul Shin. Just call me G. C.

Origially I am a KDB man but I was dispatched to and am now enjoying a challenging adventerous job at Korea Eximbank's nationwide task force team KoCC.

KoCC locates at the first floor of Korea Eximbank premises and covers comprehensive financial consulting assistance especially for small- and medium-sized firms ......

I have been quite much benefited from today's conference and the unvaluable meetings with you and am very much eager to meet you again in person as well as on tele-communication and share with your precious thoughts more.

Attached are the contact points and the photo of mine for the token of friendship.

Please keep in touch with! And, do not hesitate to let me know it if you ever need any assistance from me!

Korean weather is severe these days. Take care of your health at your utmost priority!

Truly yours,

G. C.





 

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